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New song I'm about to record any thoughts welcome. Split-scr

PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2020 5:18 pm
by Muso1070
Just finished a new song and did a little split screen live video for it.
Would be great to hear any feedback before I go about recording this one in the studio.
Lyrics also attached below as well.
Thanks :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S2q85eaS4uU

Lyrics

I've been thinking, It could be time
Build a wood house, Cedar, Oak and Pine
Fix the land up follow our dreams
Oh the sweetest thoughts, this is what I see

Cause I'm waiting on the Sun
If we plan It our day will come
It just takes time on the curve
So we're waiting, waiting on the Sun

You've been thinking the timings right
Chase the feeling that grows inside
Close an old door for a new life
Oh with a glimmer of hope, set this thing alight

Cause you're waiting on the Sun
If we plan It our day will come
It just takes time on the curve
So we're waiting, waiting on the Sun

Instrumental
Oh.... Oh....Oh... waiting ...
Oh.... Oh....Oh... waiting ...

I've been thinking, It could be time
Build a wood house, Cedar, Oak and Pine
Fix the land up follow our dreams
Oh the sweetest thoughts, this is what I see